The pencil Rough draft

Students use it every day in class, but

do they know the life they're holding?

People use them, abuse them, and even chew em but,

It is an writing utensil

students write with it and draw with it,

causing it to slowing suffer and die but why?

you can make it sharp with a pencil sharper but,

be careful you don't poke yourself,

the lead from the  number 2 pencil might

make you think twice about hurting it again.

and you can erase  most problems with its butt, but  <review how to use  commas w/ compound sentences<funny line, by the way: nice

be careful  you don't rub your its ____________<add something unexpected, yet relevant, here< butt away,

you might throw the pencil away

causing it to suffer the  lonely fate of death with no butt.

because the  is pencil, sharp, skinny  and smooth.