Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Poem Review 2


Original
But left me like the tide that goes out
and we can never stop it or get it repaired,
You are the only one I care so much about
and yet where is to be found another like you

New
But left me like the sun that comes down at night
and we cannot fix or stop which is not broken,
You are the only person I care so much about
and yet I can never find anyone like you.

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